Feedback lesson

In lesson today everyone showed the class their films and we each gave each other feedback. This is the feed back our film received:

What they thought was good:

- Lots of shot types from different angles

- Good camera work

- Fits the thriller genre

- Smooth and consistent editing

- Good close ups

- Good make up

What they thought we could improved:

- The sound

- More editing

- Zoom shouldn't have been used with the point of view shot

From these feedbacks we are please that our camera angles are good, that the make up is good and that people think it is a thriller.

Being told that the editing needs working on helps as it makes us realise the editing needs to be more quick and snappy. We knew that we have to include sound we just didn't have time to do this in the last lesson of editing. I think the comment about how we shouldn't zoom in out point of view shot is a good comment, however i am not sure how we are going to go back and re-do this shot as we are no longer allowed on the stairs in which we filmed this shot.

This lesson has been very useful and we will use all the criticisms.

Charlotte Bocking, Ryan Laxton